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#1. Review Of “The Chosen”
Review By: Inne (1)
Date and Time: 11-11-08 @ 9:23pm
Reviewer’s Rating: (4.5)
Wow! This is really great! There were only a few grammatical things like apostrophes and at one point two words were stuck together, but other than that this is a really well written piece!
#2. Review Of “The Chosen”
Review By: Anonymous Reviewer
Date and Time: 10-24-08 @ 10:16pm
Reviewer’s Rating: (3.0)
Nice, dramatic story. Some random notes:
I liked the way you avoided repetition with: He carefully observed and He turned his attention, although the last word appeared twice more in the paragraph.
He carefully observed the other people as they came in then turned his gaze to others in this room.
#3. Review Of “The Chosen”
Review By: Pammi (3)
Date and Time: 10-16-08 @ 10:19am
Reviewer’s Rating: (5.0)
This is a great start to what I feel will be a very good story. You have built the main character well, and the plot is engaging. I’m now left wondering who is the indian? what is the meaning behind his dreams. I feel that this is a clever way to leave the reader wanting more. Well done.
#4. Review Of “The Chosen”
Review By: Mr. Brightsyde (1)
Date and Time: 10-07-08 @ 8:49am
Reviewer’s Rating: (4.0)
This was very intriguing. I genuinely felt for Alex and his paranoid dilema. But, there seemed to be a rushed pace throughout this whole thing. If it was slowed down a notch it might allow the reader to catch up, visualize the place and setting more. But, that is just a suggestion. This was very enjoyable.